Bob, you can say what you like about my poetry. I'm the one with two published books and three more on the way. I can understand if your feeble mind cannot wrap itself around complex thoughts and words. If you would have read any of my other work you would have seen different styles and types of poetry. The piece you commented on however is as follows
(2) syllables
(2) syllables
(2) syllables
(2) syllables
(9) syllables
(9) syllables

And FYI this piece tied for second in the contest it was written for on www.fanstory.com